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Magazine cover learner response

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1) Add your finished magazine cover as a JPEG image. 2) Type up your feedback from your teacher. If you've received this by email, you can copy and paste it across - WWW and EBIs. You don't need to include a mark or grade if you don't want to. WWW: This is a satisfactory cover that does manage to replicate the unusual design of Wallpaper magazine. You’ve picked a quirky magazine that does things differently and your image and cover lines reflect this. However, I think overall this doesn’t quite hit the professional standards we’re aiming for in Year 13 so will prove to be a very good lesson for the coursework next year. EBI: I can see what you’re saying in the evaluation regarding composition but ultimately I don’t think your choice of image is right for a magazine cover – even a quirky one such as Wallpaper. Your face is just far too low on the cover to connect with the audience and means the product lacks impact – the audience won’t know where to look. The other key asp